I feel so
trapped, can’t breathe in this rain,
I see the
droplets, trickle down the panes,
I want to
taste those little drops of love,
As they pour
from the dark skies above.
I watch in
gloom, as they die on the ground,
Trickling away
into the sewers underground,
I want to
run, and catch them in my hold,
Let them
embrace me and make me cold.
I want to
wash my splattered soul in this rain,
Start a new life;
clean the cob-webs of my brain,
Let the
skies click my new beginning tonight,
Roar in approval;
tell me I am on the path right.
Wash me
clean, like you wash that road,
Come rain,
rid me, of all this load,
Come rain
and dissolve all of my pain,
I want to
live, start all over again.
Splendid.............. :):)
ReplyDeleteesp....dose lines: "I want to wash my splattered soul in this rain......
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...right"
i jss wonder why it has been named "The Last Rain"...when it so much speaks abt starting da life anew again!!!!!!!!
any ways...EXCELLENT...:)
I liked this a lot, I loved the image "splattered soul". I was wondering, how does rhyming work for you? All your rhymes seem to flow so smoothly - that never seems to work for me... how do you do it?
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