tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5728721953491376918.post8066885815705741103..comments2023-10-06T21:24:41.279+05:30Comments on Working with words: The Nature's revengeArchwordsmithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06097558176890386867noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5728721953491376918.post-11815716776059782642013-06-23T21:25:02.576+05:302013-06-23T21:25:02.576+05:30Wonderful poem, you should enter it in some contes...Wonderful poem, you should enter it in some contest, a sure fire winner.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5728721953491376918.post-80948310569589504252013-06-21T23:40:44.810+05:302013-06-21T23:40:44.810+05:30This poem along with the pictures moved me to tear...This poem along with the pictures moved me to tears. When will men's greed end? When they've ruined everything beautiful in the world? How much is enough?Vashtiqvega43https://www.blogger.com/profile/16857598955829160578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5728721953491376918.post-30705183830738450732013-06-20T22:32:09.775+05:302013-06-20T22:32:09.775+05:30very well written....thought provoking and very se...very well written....thought provoking and very sensitive !!<br />The question remains -- did we hear the warning bell ?? *beautiful lines* but the answer is "probably not "<br />The greed and the lust have overpowered the sense of responsibility and that asks for the price that we are paying now !!<br /><br />I always like the efforts you take for writing on burning topics...Manita V https://www.blogger.com/profile/06356584156924219093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5728721953491376918.post-64910581711035080592013-06-19T20:56:10.178+05:302013-06-19T20:56:10.178+05:30Another soul stirring poem!! Applause to you, arch...Another soul stirring poem!! Applause to you, archwordsmith! :)<br /><br />If I can take the liberty to critique your poem, I'd like to say a few things... Firstly, I felt there were a few word/phrase repetitions while reading. For example- our lust, being stripped, etc. Also, I'd love to hear more about this impact of deforestation, or should I say, about the 'impacts of the impact'. Just a mention perhaps, it could leave a mark as you build up the scene so beautifully!<br />All in all it's a wonderful poem! Thanks for sharing! Please keep writing more, I love your work! <3 ...Radhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04333893923578527075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5728721953491376918.post-56211599555519539782013-06-19T20:09:34.500+05:302013-06-19T20:09:34.500+05:30Good one bhaijaan :)Good one bhaijaan :)Rishi Shakyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00671381363479531117noreply@blogger.com